pretty funky

It was pretty funky, enjoyable, and even kind of funny at times, the only thing i did not really like in this song was how muddy the guitar was near the middle.

It felt like it could have used more bottom but most of that was probably your recording equipment( good bottom is hard to find :) ).

Pretty good

I thought the song had a good foundation, but did not seem to be as tight as it should have been, and seemed to be lacking some bottom. Unfortunately it did not seem to have a melody to give listeners anything to come back to, or any structure to make it really interesting.

The beginning riff reminded me of Primus and near the end i was reminded of Tom Morello, were you influinced by either of these?

With that being said this song seems pretty good, it just needs a bit more production to take it from a jam to a jamming song. And congratulations on putting your stuff out, you have gotten further than most musicians just keep working on improving.